Put my Euro 525i E28on Ebay, anyone to proofread?

[atikovi]

http://fototime.com/ED4B7FCAFA20187/standard.jpg

If anyone here likes the older 5-series, I just listed my European model ‘83 525i on Ebay at:

http://cgi.ebay.com/ebaymotors/ws/eBayISAPI.dll?ViewItem&item=2470056632&category=6008

If some of you can check for errors both factual and grammatical and also if I left anything out, it would be appreciated. And if you need practice bidding, well, you know what to do (hint hint).

[ilya]

dude that is an "immaculate" (ha, i was waiting to use that word!) car.
great condition, very nice writeup too.

im really shocked to see at how well it looks fater 20 years! way to keep it in such great shape!

[DrewZ]

I've always loved the small-bumper, big-headlight euro E28s. You might also want to plug your auction on the E28 board at mye28.com.

Drew Zacharda
6-speed Touring
http://members.aol.com/apzjd/newavatar.jpg (http://www.bmwe34.net/ASP/DURegistry/RegDetail.asp?id=100)


http://fototime.com/ED4B7FCAFA20187/standard.jpg

If anyone here likes the older 5-series, I just listed my European model ‘83 525i on Ebay at:

http://cgi.ebay.com/ebaymotors/ws/eBayISAPI.dll?ViewItem&item=2470056632&category=6008

If some of you can check for errors both factual and grammatical and also if I left anything out, it would be appreciated. And if you need practice bidding, well, you know what to do (hint hint).

[bahnstormer]

wow that's the nicest post i've ever seen on ebay
too bad its 5 thousand...if it was 500 i'd buy it =]

[Cacatfish]

M20 does have a timing belt rather than a timing chain, doesnt it?

[MicahO]

motor as a 2.5. Nice car!


M20 does have a timing belt rather than a timing chain, doesnt it?

[MicahO]

or perhaps it was just really bad grammar?

[winfred]

the original e28 525 was a 2.5 m30


M20 does have a timing belt rather than a timing chain, doesnt it?

[Cacatfish]

Oh I see. Never knew about that motor!

[BigD]

http://fototime.com/ED4B7FCAFA20187/standard.jpgIf some of you can check for errors both factual and grammatical and also if I left anything out, it would be appreciated. And if you need practice bidding, well, you know what to do (hint hint).

I would also like to say that you have the best auto ad I've ever seen. I love the pictures. If I was buying the car I wouldn't have a thought of doubt until I got towards the end, where you say this car has normal wear and tear which may include: nicks, blemishes, rattles etc. The words "which may include:...". Sounds like you're saying "I'm hiding some problems, you'll find them when you get the car". Just say this car is not brand new so there is some minor imperfections like little dings and interior squeaks but other than that, the car is as nice as it seems.