The loose/cracked/disconnected hose will make it idle poorly, same as removing the oil filler cap when idling. It's drawing in "false air" that isn't accounted for by the MAF and the DME is getting the mixture wrong and the idle circuit cannot correct it.
As for the ticking, I strongly suggest you open it up again as soon as you can and check the clearances. Go thru the sequence again and see if they're all within spec. It is possible you didn't get the pinch bolts tight enough and one or more of the eccentrics swiveled around and loosened the gap -- all the more reason to go back and check it again. Here's another take on adjusting valves:
http://www.nmia.com/~dgnrg/page_5.htm
I'm not too concerned you overtightened the banjo bolts to the poing of pinching off the flow, unless you tightened them to 88 ft-lb instead of 88 in-lb, but you would have stripped the threads long before that. One indication that the spraybar has been over-tightened is they will squirt the soft aluminum seal washer out to one side of the bolt. As you're probably aware, the banjo bolts are trouble on numerous 4, 6, and 12-cyl BMW motors and I highly recommend (shameless plug!) that you buy a set of my cross-drilled banjo bolts which allow you to safety wire them in place. I have 100's of very satisfied customers around the world who are using them and in my opinion, besides getting a sheetmetal tab to fold over the side of the hex head, safety wire is the only way to go:
http://www.nmia.com/~dgnrg/banjo.htm